Old poems

I'm gonna start posting some old poems of mine that I wrote awhile ago, just for kicks.  I haven't written any in a while, and I'm just copy-and-pasting these, so that the urge to edit does not strike! *g*

So read, enjoy (hopefully!), and comment if you want to.

*smooches to all!*

With Abandon

 

( Old poem of mine )

Life From Death

 

( Another old poem )

Silenced

 

( Yet another old poem )

Breathless

( The last old poem for tonight )

I need a beta, please!

This is my Official Request for a beta (or two)!  It's TS, J/B, First Times. 

I need someone who can give me pointers on little grammar/sentence structure things, and who can help with my first 'real' (insert air quotes) sex scene. Don't worry, I don't think it's too too terrible.  Any other sort of suggestions are welcome and appreciated and begged for.

As I said in an earlier post, I'm actually rather proud of this little (8,000-ish words) fic, and I want to get it out and about ASAP, so if you're interested in helping me out, just comment below, and let me know what you can do to help! (full beta, grammar only, etc.)

Anything else you want to know about the story, just ask in the comments.

Thanks so much, and I'm counting on you, dear friends list!

*super-duper smooches to all*