Okay, so I have a Question.
Right now, I'm writing a little story(TS, of course) called Oh, Crap, I'm in Love With You! (title may change, since I think it's sort of long). As it stands now, Blair knows that there's something that feels weird about his relationship with Jim. He sort of slowly comes closer and closer to realizing what it is, and one night blurts out that he loves Jim, hence the title. (though it's not worded exactly that way). Luckily, Jim loves him back, so Much Love Ensues. But now my muse is kinda wanting Blair to agonize a bit, which doesn't fit with how quickly things happen here. So should I give in to the muse and give Blair a little angst? I do love my Blair!angst....
Any suggestions? Should I change it, or just let it be, and stop messing with it? Tell me what to do? Help me?!
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So, for instance, what is causing Blair's agonizing? It could be that he never thought of himself as falling in love with any guy, much less Jim. That's angst that generated from within Blair.
Is he agonzing because when he made his declaration Jim didn't give him an immediate "I love you too Blair" and then Blair leaves in embarassment? That's caused by Blair reacting to external events.
In these examples, if I were writing, I'd do a draft of each, since you said the story is pretty short, so it's not a hardship to put down several variations. Then see which one flows best for you.
Or you could just leave it as is and let people read a sweet little story. Nothing wrong with that -- it will make people smile. You can save the agony for the next fic!
Good luck!
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